Monday, February 7, 2011

I stood the autumn


I stood the autumn

I flew with the wind, not knowing where I would go…

Left I went and sometimes to the right,

As the winds settled, I landed down,

Not knowing where I was, what I was to do…





As the soil fell on me, I felt I was done for good.

Water moved on me, wetting me, dirtying me.

I felt this was the end of me…




Seasoned passed, I grew –

From dust and dirt to see the sun;

Sky’s the limit I felt, all but to know there were taller people than I.




Seasons changed – summer to winter, heat to cold;

When the sun was hot, there was no shade – I wanted to run but couldn’t

When the rain drenched, there was no cover – I wanted to run but couldn’t

When the winter froze, there was no blanket – I wanted to run but couldn’t

I lost my precious breath – I was hopeless what was next




My hands folded – nowhere to move, fighting for each breadth I stood

I just stood just believing I needed to stand, I had nothing but to stand

Stood I, as the birds flew, stood I as the heat increased, Stood I




I believed I would stand the autumn,

As my Breadth returned!

I knew, I stood, I knew, I stood the autumn.

- Chi

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I have used a metaphor of a tree to indicate the state of mind of an individual, right from the birth to growth. It signifies the importance of strength of mind in surviving hard times. This is my interpretation but is open to various other interpretations too.


17 comments:

Sahana said...

Good one :)

Unknown said...

good goin bro :) :)

Sundar said...

Nice one maga..

Anonymous said...

Hey sachi good good , keep it up ........... you will reach the aim

Parisarapremi said...

arrey, sakkathaagide kaNree... :-)

Sachidananda Benegal said...

Thank you all :)

Neeru said...

good one Sachi :)

Unknown said...

Tumba Chennagide....:-)

Satwik Kashyap said...

Very nice one. Reminds me of

ದಿವಸದಿಂ ದಿವಸಕ್ಕೆ ನಿಮಿಷದಿಂ ನಿಮಿಷಕ್ಕೆ ।
ಭವಿಷಿಯವ ಚಿಂತಿಸದೆ ಬದುಕ ನೂಕುತಿರು ।।
ವಿವರಗಳ ಜೋಡಿಸುವ ಯಜಮಾನ ಬೇರಿಹನು ।
ಸವೆಸು ನೀಂ ಜನುಮವನು ಮಂಕುತಿಮ್ಮ ।।

Sachidananda Benegal said...

ಡಿ ವಿ ಜಿ ಯವರಿಗೆ ಜಯವಾಗಲಿ. ಮಂಕು ತಿಮ್ಮನ ಕಗ್ಗಕ್ಕೆ ಜಯವಾಗಲಿ. ಸಿರಿಗನ್ನಡಂ ಗೆಲ್ಗೆ ಸಿರಿಗನ್ನಡಂ ಬಾಳ್ಗೆ

Sachidananda Benegal said...

ಇನ್ನು ಮುಂದೆ ಕನ್ನಡದಲ್ಲಿ ಸಹ ಬರೆಯುವೆ

ranjan sandeep said...
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ranjan sandeep said...

Dear Sachi,

Its nice to read those inspiring lines,

I remember one thing to this context,

be it fire
be it stone
be it wind
be like water... on earth..
with due persistent like water to melt even stone...
cheers.

Unknown said...

great one sir!..really nice :).waiting eagerly for next one :D

Unknown said...

great one sir!..really awesome :).waiting eagerly for the next one :D

Sumana said...

Beautifully framed Sachu.
I couldn't connect myself first time when I read it.. but I went along and re-read it... I could picturesque your each and every word...the struggle to stand n face.
Lovely.

Sumana said...

Beautifully framed Sachu.
I couldn't connect myself first time when I read it.. but I went along and re-read it... I could picturesque your each and every word...the struggle to stand n face.
Lovely.